Contents page: first draft

This is the first draft of my contents page which was also made using Adobe Photoshop elements 4.0.

This was made using the same principle as in the front cover. First of all, it follows the eye order as well as the rule of thirds.
However, there are many faults in this draft of the contents page. For example, there is too many text on a one A4 sized contents page. This makes it looks like the page is 'suffocating'. This is also given by the size of the text as it is too big.
The colour scheme of the text does not fit the front cover of the magazine. This won't show that the front cover and the contents page relate and can confuse the reader.
Overall, this is a poorly made contents page, however, it is the first draft and so an improved version will be uploaded shortly.