Thursday 11 February 2010

First draft of my DPS

This was the first draft i did for my DPS. I thought i was okay, but it does need a lot to improve on.
For example, the background, first of all, does not fit well with the image of the band as it looks like the image have been pasted to the background. The lighting contrasts between the two images as the image in front looks more darker than the background and so it does not look natural.
The article title itself is too grungy for the article and doesn't fit into the atmosphere of the article itself (the background also seems to do this).
One good thing about this DPS draft is that it has a good composition which follows the eye flow and distinctly show that in this DPS, the image is valued more than the text.

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